I cannot imagine my life without you
I cannot imagine my life without you.
When I'm alone, I look forward to touching you.
It was so unpredictable, so unexpected...
This feeling of love... And I can't help it.
When I'm alone, I cannot help missing you.
When it is so, I look forward to kissing you.
My love is real, you can believe me.
And I'll be with you. And you... Be with me!
I think of you always when you're away
But I see I'm not lonely when I hear you say
That you miss me, you love me, you wait for me there.
You make me live my life without despair.
I will always need you to be by my side.
I'll never be ready to hear good-bye.
I'll never be able to do this myself.
Remember, remember, there is no one else
But you in my life, in my fate, in my world
'cause you are the one making me feel so strong.
Oh, baby, oh, God, if only you knew
How much when apart I keep longing for you!!!
Здравствуйте, Лилия!
В целом неплохо, но во втором катрене повтор рифмы не звучит. Хотя может быть Вы так задумали.
Честно, читается тяжеловато.
With all my respect!
Любомудр
вт, 05/07/2011 - 19:44